Friday 14 June 2019

Jacob's persuasive writing

All students should not have tablet or a laptop


All students should not have a tablet or a laptop at school




Most people’s opinion is that all students should have a tablet at school. In my opinion, I think tablets and laptops should be not compulsory at school, here are some reasons that will change your opinion.




Students don't need tablets and laptops at school because most students at home spend a lot of hours on devices at home, and it good to socialize at school and good to make friends. When you spend a lot of time on devices you can get lazy and it is enjoyable to go out on your bike or do something outside.




Most kids have bad handwriting at school and it can teach bad habits and if you write in your book you can help you write words that you have trouble writing and its good skill to know how to use a dictionary. When you start writing on your computer you have to worry about how much charge, was when you can just get your book out and start writing.




When you are on your devices you can easily get off task and it is hard to control what you do online and you can search inappropriate stuff online and you can send bad emails to people. People can not afford 3 to 4 kids to get a laptop or a tablet for school.




In my opinion, I think that laptop and tablets should not compulsory at school hopefully I have changed your opinion towards laptops at school. Do you have a computer or a tablet and why?




By Jacob.

4 comments:

  1. Hi there Jacob, my name is Estella and I am a student in Room 14 at Mangapapa School. I really like your persuasive writing and I agree with you completely. It made me think of how lots of people already have screen time at home and that you actually think the same thing about this situation as me. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://estellaslearningblog.blogspot.com/

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  2. Hi there, my name is Finn and I am a student in Room 14 at Mangapapa School. I agree with you because no body always likes going on devices. I really like how you made the topic on devices. It made me think of me and the devices that I have at my house and my chromebook.
    Have you thought about not taking up too much space next time? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://finncslearning.blogspot.com/

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  3. Hi my name is Mikayla and I am a student at mangapapa school in room 14 and I found this post really interesting and I agree with the reasons you listed but we should but sometimes we need tablets and laptops for learning so that can be another thing to think about.
    From Mikayla

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  4. Hi Jacob
    My name is Maddisyn. And I am a student at mangapapa school in room 14.I like how you explained why students should not have tablets or laptops at school.And I agree with you cause the people in my class with devices always do there writing on there devices instead of in there book. But sometimes students will need a chromebook if there is not enough school chromebook. Like when we have Manaiakalani every tuesday. we need a chromebook and there a never enough. anyway once again i do agree with you.

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